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Last week, I ate tokbokki which is famous Korean street food. I ordered them in the app Nowfood. It was a bad day, I’ve got bad mark and I didn’t do anything. As a result, I’m determined to do set a goal again . First, I found my mistake in the paper exam and open my iPhone to do it. But, when I turned on the phone I was distracted by For sale foods like pizza, hotdogs, milktea and so on. I couldn't win with an empty belly. So, I bought it and it was delicious. The fragrance of rice with the pungent spice of sauce makes the best junkfood that I have ever eaten before. Tokbokki helped my mood was much better on a soggy afternoon in Hanoi. This is my great memory with junk food in special cases like that
17. Jan. 2021 16:38
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Last week, I ate tokbokki which is a famous Korean street food. I ordered them on the app Nowfood. It was a bad day, I got a bad mark and I didn’t do anything (I’m not sure what you mean, maybe “I hadn’t done anything all day” as a result of getting the bad mark?). As a result, I was determined to set (myself) a goal again. First, I found my mistake in the exam paper and opened my iPhone to do it (correct it?). But, when I turned on the phone I was distracted by foods for sale like pizzas, hotdogs, milktea and so on. I couldn't win with an empty belly. So, I bought some tokbokki and they were delicious. The fragrance of the rice with the pungent spices in the sauce made for the best junkfood that I have ever eaten. The tobokki helped improve my mood on a soggy afternoon in Hanoi. This is my great memory with junk food in special cases like that
The last sentence doesn’t quite work. Maybe you could say something like this: It was very memorable, and I think it’s fine to have junk food in special cases like this one.
17. Januar 2021
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