The shoes I had been looking forward to finally arrived today. The design was exactly as shown in the photo and looked really cute. I can’t wait to wear them and go out. I’m glad I bought it.

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Yuiko

9. Mai 2025 11:01

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The shoes I had been waiting for finally arrived today. The design is exactly as shown in the photo and they look really cute. I can’t wait to go out and wear them. I’m glad I bought them.

10. Mai 2025

The shoes I had been looking forward to finally arrived today. The design was exactly as shown in the photo and they looked really cute. I can’t wait to wear them and go out. I’m glad I bought them.

Change the last word to "them" as shoes are plural. Adding "they" before looked is optional but it adds clarity by making the subject of that clause clearer. (It's the shoes rather than the style.)

9. Mai 2025

The shoes I had been looking forward to finally arrived today. The design was exactly as shown in the photo and looked really cute. I can’t wait to wear them and go out. I’m glad I bought them

9. Mai 2025

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