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090_2106 Could you help me by correcting the text ?【Man like a manga※】Shohei Ohtani (MLB player) is continuing to active as a two way player ; a pitcher and hitter in the U.S. It's quiet unbelievable! He hit again 2 home runs at the same game yesterday. I can't keep my eyes off his games and daily news. That always makes me feel brighter. ※like a manga means an unreal thing. (Japanese metaphor)
19. Juni 2021 15:40
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【Man like a manga※】 Shohei Ohtani, (MLB player), is continuing to achieve, as a two way player ; a pitcher and hitter in the U.S. It's quite unbelievable! He hit 2 home runs again at the same game yesterday. I can't keep my eyes off his games, and the daily news. It always makes me feel brighter. ※"Like a manga", means, an unreal thing, (Japanese metaphor).
I personally would write this differently though. I'd structure this paragraph as follows: Shohei Ohtani (MLB player), is continuing to excel as a two way player. He is both a pitcher and hitter in the U.S, and he is quite unbelievable! He once again, hit two home runs at the same game yesterday. I can't keep my eyes off his games, and the daily news about him, it always brightens my day. ※"Like a manga" is a Japanese metaphor, that means, an unreal thing.
19. Juni 2021
19. Juni 2021
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