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Noemí Villagómez
Hi everyone. Could somebody help me by checking if the next paragraph is correct? I am preparing my resume. Thank you in advance. “•Coordinated with different departments two projects related to e-commerce sales. •Analyzed and planned the volume of product purchase with distributors in order to cover coverage, manage payment credits, and storage volumes. •Negotiated with commercial partners the establishment of prices for its online sale. •Implemented improvements in electronic invoicing and its sending by email to the client, through good communication with the Systems and Accounting Area. •Increased the sales of a project from $40.0 K a $300.0 K per month. •Analyzed and implemented confidentiality contracts.
16. Nov. 2020 20:18
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"distributors in order to cover coverage" Personally, I would change the word cover to something else such as delegate, institute, etc.
16. November 2020
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Also, put "to" instead of "a" in the following sentence: Increased the sales of a project from $40.0 K a $300.0 K per month.
16. November 2020
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