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Given a table that clearly illustrates the striking contrasts in the satisfaction survey of clerks' work in a certain company.
To examine the root cause of this tendency, certain factors should be specifically pointed out here. Firstly, having “9+9+6”overtime mode rendered it possible for the year group under 40 to continuously increase company effeciency,as a result of which the satisfaction survey of employee is relatively small in young groups. Secondly, social media platforms substantically facilitate the flow and intensification of life stage fulfillment awareness of the age group over 50, thus accelerating the transition from an emerging phenomenon into the new reality.
In conclusion, this tendency is of profound inevitability, and will continue to exist in the foreeable future. Correspondingly, as the vanguard and successor of our society, we should grasp the pulse of this trend, surf the wave of this era, and actively meet whatever challenges and opportunities it may bring forth.
8. Dez. 2023 13:51
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Given a table that clearly illustrates the striking contrasts in the
satisfaction survey of clerks' work in a certain company. To examine the root
cause of this tendency, certain factors should be specifically pointed out here.
Firstly, having “9+9+6” overtime mode rendered it possible for the year group
under 40 to continuously increase company efficiency, as a result of which the
satisfaction survey of employees is relatively small in young groups. Secondly,
social media platforms substantially facilitate the flow and intensification of
life-stage fulfillment awareness of the age group over 50, thus accelerating the
transition from an emerging phenomenon into a new reality. In conclusion, this
tendency is of profound inevitability and will continue to exist in the
foreseeable future. Correspondingly, as the vanguard and successor of our society,
we should grasp the pulse of this trend, surf the wave of this era, and actively
meet whatever challenges and opportunities it may bring forth.
9. Dezember 2023
Given, is a table that clearly illustrates the striking contrasts in the
satisfaction survey of clerks' who work in a certain company. To examine the root
cause of this tendency, certain factors should be specifically pointed out here.
Firstly, having “9+9+6”overtime mode has rendered it possible for the under 40 age group to continuously increase company efficiency, as a result of which the
satisfaction level for those employees is relatively low. Secondly,
social media platforms facilitate the flow and intensification of
life stage fulfillment awareness of the age group over 50, thus accelerating the
transition from an emerging phenomenon into the new reality. (This sentence is too confusing) In conclusion, this
tendency (what tendency?) is of profound inevitability, and will continue to exist in the
foreeable future. Correspondingly, as the vanguard and successor of our society,
we should grasp the pulse of this trend, surf the wave of this era, and actively
meet whatever challenges and opportunities it may bring forth.
You need to try this again. Firstly, you need to mention the numbers in the table and how they vary for the different age groups. Then you need to explain clearly why you think this is. Using too many “long words” is not helpful.
8. Dezember 2023
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