Good job using some transitional language to give your answer a nice clear structure! Some points for improvement: - to make your sentence more complex and flow better, you can combine the first two sentences. E.g I like living alone for two particular reasons: - “The one” should be changed to ‘the first reason’ - Add ‘that’ (the first reason is THAT …) - Finally, instead of “that is the reason I prefer to live alone”, it should be “these are the reasons…” because you’ve listed more than one. Hope this helps! :)