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Hello. It is a nice whether today in Japan isn't it? Shaved ice would hit the spot for a sizzling day like today. Shaved ice is sold at a my local summer's festival for 50 yen. Have you been eaten shaved ice? My favorite flavor is melon and strawberry. These are sweet and delicious. If you come to Japan, please eat it. I think you will like it.
26. Juni 2023 04:18
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Hello. It is nice weather today in Japan, isn't it? Shaved ice would hit the spot for a sizzling day like today. Shaved ice is sold at a my local summer festival for 50 yen. Have you ever eaten shaved ice? My favorite flavor is melon and strawberry. These are sweet and delicious. If you come to Japan, please try shaved ice. I think you will like it.
Good job. I love shaved ice! Note: It isn't wrong to say "please eat it" but it sounds nicer/friendlier to say "please try..."
26. Juni 2023
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