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Jenya Bykov
*My trip to Malta* Last year I decided to go to a language school in MaltađŸ‡ČđŸ‡č to get rid of my language barrier. It was an interesting experience, and today I'm going to tell you about this little country. How can I describe Malta in two words? Hot and antiquity. I couldn't walk at the day time without sunscreen due to me burn easily (30 minutes might be enough to burn). And there is such a humid air, so I was sweating even at night! While I was in Malta, I felt like I'm in an ancient century. All buildings around me were made of stones. And the roads are quite thin - usually it has only one way. By history, Malta was occupied by Rome, Greek, French, Arabian and it was British colony as well. That's why Maltese speak English and have so diversity culture. Yep, I'm very curious about history. Also, Malta is a popular place to making a movie. I remember, I was seeing "Jurassic World Dominion", and I was a little shocked when I saw the same street as outside the cinema. One more thing that I want to say about Malta - this is entertainment there. There are a lot of clubs, beaches, fishing, yachts, parties in language school, and water activities. That's it for today. There are a lot of things that I can tell about Malta. Probably, I'm going to write it later. Thanks for reading!
10. Juli 2023 08:31
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*My trip to Malta* Last year I decided to go to a language school in MaltađŸ‡ČđŸ‡č to overcome my language barrier. It was an interesting experience and today, I'm going to tell you about this little country. How can I describe Malta in two words? 'Heat' and 'antiquity'. I couldn't walk during the day time without sunscreen due to me getting burnt easily (30 minutes might be enough to burn). And there is so much humidity in the air so I was sweating even at night! While I was in Malta, I felt like I was in the past. All the buildings around me were made of stone. The roads are quite narrow - usually it has only one way. During its history, Malta was occupied by the Romans, the Greeks, the French, and the Arabs. It was a British colony as well. That's why Maltese speak English and have such a diverse culture. Yep, I'm very curious about history. Also, Malta is a popular place to make a movie. I remember watching "Jurassic World Dominion", and I was a little shocked when I saw the same street as outside the cinema. One more thing that I want to say about Malta - there is so much entertainment there. There are a lot of clubs, beaches, fishing, yachts, parties in the language school, and water activities. That's it for today. There are a lot of things that I can tell about Malta. Probably, I'm going to write it later. Thanks for reading!
1) We normally 'overcome' a barrier. 2) I changed 'hot' to 'heat' because 'antiquity' is a noun and this way you are using two nouns instead of a noun and an adjective. 3) Roads are usually described as narrow or wide. 4) In the context of history, we normally talk about the civilisations instead of the places. Therefore, the Romans instead of Rome etc. 5) to make a movie OR for making a movie 6) we normally watch a movie/TV series etc. Well done! I really liked that and you only made a few small errors regarding vocabulary and phrase. Great work!
10. Juli 2023
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