Overall, your essay provides a good description of the information presented in the line graph. However, there are a few areas where you could make some improvements for clarity and accuracy. Let me provide you with some feedback and suggested revisions: Introduction: "The line graph illustrates the number of vacationers who go to an island in the Caribbean from 2010 to 2017." The introduction is clear and gives a good overview of what the line graph represents. Overview: "Overall, the figure for total visits experienced an upward trend throughout the period. Additionally, small fluctuations can be observed in both figures for visitors who stay on cruise ships and on the island." The overview is well-written, but you can make it even stronger by providing specific numbers or percentage changes to highlight the extent of the upward trend and fluctuations. For example: "Overall, the total number of visits to the Caribbean island showed a consistent upward trend, increasing from 1 million in 2010 to approximately 3.5 million in 2017. The number of visitors staying on the island remained relatively stable at around 1.5 million between 2013 and 2015, while vacationers staying on cruise ships saw a gradual increase, surpassing 2 million by the end of the period."

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