Yesterday, I went to bed at 10:30 p.m., so I woke up at 6:30 a.m. today without an alarm. I cleaned the bathroom, vacuumed my room, folded the laundry, and cleaned the mirror. I still need to clean the toilet, wash the dishes, take out the trash, and put the sheets on my bed. I will do them after I come home from school.
After my shower, I used a hair milk instead of hair oil. It smells really nice, and the good smell stayed even after my hair dried. It made me happy.
When I wake up early, I can do many things that I usually cannot do. Even small things make me happy, so I hope I can keep waking up early.
After school today, I have a part-time job. Today’s members are a little different from usual, but many of my favorite coworkers will be there, so I think I can do my best.
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Yesterday, I went to bed at 10:30 p.m., so I woke up at 6:30 a.m. today without an alarm. I cleaned the bathroom, vacuumed my room, folded the laundry, and cleaned the mirror. I still need to clean the toilet, wash the dishes, take out the rubbish, and put the sheets on my bed. I will do those things after I come home from school.
After my shower, I used hair milk instead of hair oil. It smells really nice, and the pleasant scent remained even after my hair had dried. It made me happy.
When I wake up early, I can do many things that I usually cannot do. Even small things make me happy, so I hope I can keep waking up early.
After school today, I have a part-time job. Today’s team is a little different from usual, but many of my favourite coworkers will be there, so I think I can do my best.
Level: C1.
Your writing is fluent, detailed, and very well organised. You describe your daily routine naturally and include a good range of vocabulary and time expressions. Your grammar is very accurate, and only a few vocabulary and style adjustments were needed to make your English sound more natural in British English. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
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