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Saddam Hussain
Here I would talk about one photo. In our university, once there was a photo exhibition festival, one of our teachers was shoot a photo in which there was a deer whos son was attacked by a leopard, and she was looking to his child helplessly with tears in her eyes.
8. März 2023 10:16
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"In this section, I will describe a particular photo. At our university's photo exhibition festival, one of our teachers captured a powerful image of a deer whose offspring had been attacked by a leopard. In the photo, the mother deer is looking helplessly at her injured child with tears in her eyes."
I corrected the verb tense to make it consistent throughout the passage. Also, "shoot" should be replaced with "captured", and "whos" should be "whose".
8. März 2023
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Saddam Hussain
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Englisch, Paschtunisch, Urdu
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Englisch
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