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It has been raining intensely. When my mother picked me up on Friday, it started to rain. She saw that the sky was dark, so she went back to get umbrellas. We normally walked back, but since it was raining, we took a bus. When we were on the bus, the rain became heavy, as heavy as in Rashōmon. The passengers were shouting, taking videos and so on. It became like we were in a lake. It falls on the windows, bars, also on my heart.
When she walked with me to the train station, it was also raining. As there were raincoats provided at the subway station in Beijing, I didn’t take a taxi.
When I was going to work, it was still raining. There were many earthworms left the soil and can never go back.
It’s really autumn now. A spring day turns inexorably into an autumn one with rain.
26. Aug. 2024 09:39
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It has been raining intensely. When my mother picked me up on Friday, it started to rain. She saw that the sky was dark, so she went back to get umbrellas. We normally walked back, but since it was raining, we took a bus. When we were on the bus, the rain became heavy, as heavy as in Rashōmon. The passengers were shouting, taking videos and so on. It became like we were in a lake. It falls on the windows, bars, also on my heart.
When she walked with me to the train station, it was also raining. As there were raincoats provided at the subway station in Beijing, I didn’t take a taxi.
When I was going to work, it was still raining. There were many earthworms left the soil and can never go back.
It’s really autumn now. A spring day turns inexorably into an autumn one with rain.
Beautiful! You used English well - almost poetically! An interesting - and accurate - use of "inexorably".
26. August 2024
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李千金
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Chinesisch (Mandarin), Englisch
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Chinesisch (Mandarin), Englisch
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