Today it rained very hard. Because of the heavy rain, I couldn’t get to my second class on time. In the evening, I hung out with my friends. One of my friends will turn 20 next week, so we wanted to d

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Today it rained very hard. Because of the heavy rain, I couldn’t get to my second class on time. In the evening, I hung out with my friends. One of my friends will turn 20 next week, so we wanted to do something before she leaves her teenage years. We played with clay together in Shibuya. It reminded us of our childhood, and we had a lot of fun.

17. Juli 2026 14:33

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Today, it rained very heavily. Because of the heavy rain, I couldn’t get to my second class on time. In the evening, I spent time with my friends. One of my friends will turn 20 next week, so we wanted to do something special before she leaves her teenage years. We played with clay together in Shibuya. It reminded us of our childhood, and we had a lot of fun.

Level: C1. Your writing is fluent, natural, and well organised. You describe events clearly and express your feelings effectively. Your use of past tense is accurate, and your vocabulary is appropriate for the topic. Only a few small word-choice adjustments were needed to make your writing sound even more natural. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊

17. Juli 2026 15:06

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