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Long time no see everyone! Today I’m going talk about my summer vacation. In July, I went to Amami island where my grandparents are living in. I went to there with my friends. Amami island has very beautiful ocean and nature. However, when I went there, a typhoon was just coming, so the weather was bad. We couldn't swim in the beautiful ocean.
We ate delicious gelato, ate fruit and went for a drive.I had a lot of fun.
In August, I went camping in Ibaraki Prefecture with my friends. We went into the pool, had a barbecue and bathed together! We talked a lot and laughed. I was so happy.
I have many other memories, but this summer I had a lot of fun playing with many friends.
27. Sep. 2023 10:13
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Long time no see everyone! Today I’m going to talk about my summer vacation. In
In July, I went to Amami Island, where my grandparents were living. I went
there with my friends. Amami Island has a
very beautiful ocean and nature.
However, when I went there, a typhoon was just coming, so the weather was bad.
We couldn't swim in the beautiful ocean. We ate delicious gelato, ate fruit, and
went for a drive. I had a lot of fun. In August, I went camping in Ibaraki
Prefecture with my friends. We went into the pool, had a barbecue, and bathed
together! We talked a lot and laughed. I was so happy. I have many other
memories, but this summer I had a lot of fun playing with many friends.
27. September 2023
1
Long time no see everyone! Today I’m going talk about my summer vacation. In July, I went to Amami island where my grandparents are living. I went there with my friends. Amami island has a very beautiful ocean and nature. However, when I went there, a typhoon was just coming, so the weather was bad. We couldn't swim in the beautiful ocean.
We ate delicious gelato, ate fruit and went for a drive.I had a lot of fun.
In August, I went camping in Ibaraki Prefecture with my friends. We went into the pool, had a barbecue and bathed together! We talked a lot and laughed. I was so happy.
I have many other memories, but this summer I had a lot of fun playing with many friends.
Well done! A nice piece of writing. Just a few small corrections needed. Keep it up :)
27. September 2023
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