Anderson Aya
This is Guayabetal Cundinamarca Colombia. A beaurifull place. We have two river. To the right is black river and to the left is white River. I live nigh of white River.
In summer white River the peoples go to swim. Because the water is crystal. This place is very turistic. Is the color brawn because in Colombia it is winter. On the other hand, black river always is black.
That is union of two rivers. (other day I show my hause.)
22. Nov. 2020 18:48
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This is Guayabetal Cundinamarca Colombia. A beautiful place. We have two rivers.
To the right is the Black River and to the left is the White River. I live next to the White
River. In summer, people go to swim in the White River, because the water is
crystal clear. This place is attracts a lot of tourists. The river is (now?) brown because it is winter in Colombia. On the other hand, the Black River always is black. That is the union of the two rivers. (Next time (?) I will show my house.)
Hi! I offered some corrections to your passage. Names of rivers are capitalized, and often you can condense the sentence in English to make it more accurate. 😀 hope it helps!
22. November 2020
This is Guayabetal Cundinamarca Colombia. A beaurifull place. We have two river.
To the right is black river and to the left is white River. I live nigh of white
River. In summer white River the peoples go to swim. Because the water is
crystal. This place is very turistic. Is the color brawn because in Colombia it
is winter. On the other hand, black river always is black. That is union of two
rivers. (other day I show my hause.)
Quick spell check corrections :
Beaurifull - beautiful
Nigh - unsure what you want to say here
Brawn - Brown
Now coming to sentences:
1. I live on the white river side
2. In summer people swim or go to swim at white river because the water is crystal clear during summer.
3. Now the water color is brown due to winter season in Columbia ( I assumed this is what you are trying to convey based on entire context)
4. Black river is always black
5. Another day I will show my house
Hope this helps. Keep learning mi Amigo. Adios.
22. November 2020
This is Guayabetal, Cundinamarca, Colombia. It's a beautiful place. We have two rivers.
To the right is the Black River and to the left is the White River. I live near the White
River. In the summer, people go to the White River to swim because the water is
crystal-clear. This place is very touristic. The color is brown because it
is winter in Colombia. On the other hand, the Black River is always black. That is the confluence of the two
rivers. (another day, I'll show my house.)
22. November 2020
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