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Sanya Georgieva
Hello, everyone. This is Abby. We have been together for 1 year. I adopted her from a Bulgarian shelter. She was thin, dirty, and afraid of many things. She is a breed - love. He mixes with a Bulgarian Karakachan dog, they become quite large. Abby is 4 years old and weighs 50 kg. Now she feels good, she gets a lot of love. Greetings from Abby :)
22. Dez. 2020 16:29
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Hello, everyone. This is Abby. We have been together for 1 year. I adopted her
from a Bulgarian shelter. She was thin, dirty, and afraid of many things.
These first four sentences are perfect: well done!
She is a breed - love. He mixes with a Bulgarian Karakachan dog, they become quite
large.
Unfortunately, these two sentences aren’t so clear for me... it’s possible that my lack of dog knowledge is to blame 😂 What do you mean by “a breed-love” (a cross-breed? A mutt?). Who is “he”? Is “mixes” supposed to be present simple or should it be past simple (talking about Abby’s history?).
Abby is 4 years old and weighs 50 kg. Now she feels good, she gets a lot
of love. Greetings from Abby :)
Hi Sanya! Abby is so gorgeous - what a transformation, and happy one year anniversary together! I hope my corrections can help you improve further :-)
22. Dezember 2020
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Hello, everyone. This is Abby. We have been together for 1 year. I adopted her
from a Bulgarian shelter. She was thin, dirty, and afraid of many things. She is
a breed - love. He mixes with a Bulgarian Karakachan dog, they become quite
large. Abby is 4 years old and weighs 50 kg. Now she feels good, she gets a lot
of love. Greetings from Abby :)
Hi Sanya, I won't correct it because Tamsin did a great job.
I will just comment that maybe "Greetings" is a bit of an old expression and would normally be to say hello at the start. To finish, it would be better to say "Regards".
That's a lovely story about Abby. You have changed her life. 50 kilos!!!
Keep practicing. Simón.
22. Dezember 2020
1
Hello, everyone. This is Abby. We have been together for 1 year. I adopted her
from a Bulgarian shelter. She was thin, dirty, and afraid of many things. She is
a breed - love. He mixes with a Bulgarian Karakachan dog, they become quite
large. Abby is 4 years old and weighs 50 kg. Now she feels good, she gets a lot
of love. Greetings from Abby :)
Beautiful dog, my dog is very afraid too.
Thanks to write about your pet.
22. Dezember 2020
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