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Last weekend, I joined the Tokyo Yosakoi Festival. It was held near Ikebukuro Station, and I danced Yosakoi there with my team. We performed for two days in a row. On the first day, it was raining and very cold. Even though the weather was bad, we danced with all our energy. Many people still came to watch, and their support made us smile.
On the second day, there was a competition. We had practiced a lot for this moment, and everyone gave their best performance. We danced in perfect sync, and I felt proud of our teamwork. However, we didn’t win any awards. Of course, we were a little disappointed, but we were also happy because we did our best and had fun together. Now, we only have one month left before our senior members retire. That makes me feel a little sad, but I want to enjoy every moment with them. I hope we can make more great memories as a team. I will keep dancing with a smile and treasure the time we have left.
15. Okt. 2025 03:09
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Last weekend, I joined the Tokyo Yosakoi Festival. It was held near Ikebukuro
Station, and I danced Yosakoi there with my team. We performed for two days in a
row. On the first day, it was raining and very cold. Even though the weather was
bad, we danced with all our energy. Many people still came to watch, and their
support made us smile. On the second day, there was a competition. We had
practiced a lot for this moment, and everyone gave their best performance. We
danced in perfect sync, and I felt proud of our teamwork. However, we didn’t win
any awards. Of course, we were a little disappointed, but we were also happy
because we did our best and had fun together. we only have one month left
before our senior members retire. That makes me feel a little sad, but I want to
enjoy every moment with them. I hope we can make more great memories as a team.
I will keep dancing with a smile and treasure the time we have left.
良く書けています!!本当に素晴らしいポストで、添削するところは全くないと思います。確かに賞も受けたら、良いんですが、みんなと楽しめれば、何よりですね〜チームとの素敵な思い出を作り続くことを祈っていますね🙏 これからもemeさんを応援しますね✨
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15. Okt. 2025 03:57
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