Mona
Hi Would you tell which one of these sentences is more advisable to write a very well-formed, understandable article? 1- Seeking ways TO rethink our development and TO use technology to protect the planet against further environmental damage. 2- Seeking ways TO rethink our development and USE technology to protect the planet against further environmental damage.
4. März 2021 11:50
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Honestly, I don't like either choice. I would write: We are rethinking our development and seeking ways to use technology to protect the planet against further environmental damage.
4. März 2021
1
I like 2 better. 1 has too many TOs. BTW, those are not actually sentences. They are clauses. They never say who is seeking.
5. März 2021
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