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It was terrible weather today. Big typhoon came to Japan but I still had a classe so I went to a college in the storm🌬 My shoes and socks got wet and even my jeans got wet too. The temperature was not high and I felt so cold.
1. Okt. 2021 14:34
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It was terrible weather today. Big typhoon came to Japan but I still had a classe so I went to a college in the storm🌬 My shoes and socks got wet and even my jeans got wet too. The temperature was not high and I felt so cold.
This is really good. Here's how I would write that: We had terrible weather today. A big typhoon came to Japan but I still had class so I went to my college. My shoes, socks, and even my jeans got wet. The temperature was low and I felt so cold. Some of my changes were for style and not strictly necessary. Overall, very well written. Sorry to hear about the rainy day!
1. Oktober 2021
The weather was terrible today. A big typhoon came to Japan but I still had classes so I went to a college in the storm🌬 My shoes and socks got wet and even my jeans got wet too. The temperature was not high and I felt so cold.
1. Oktober 2021
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