Could you help me modify my essay？Many thanks！ In recent years,more and more people choose alternative medicines and treatments rather than visit their usual doctor. From my perspective, the advantages of this trend are outweighted by its drabacks. The benefits of this trend could be argued that it may save the time and money. Nowadays,the lifestyle of people is becoming faster than before. People has less timecontrolled by themselves. and may not have enough time to see the doctor. Additionally, because of the development of internet, people can find information easily on internet. Therefore,people can according their own feelings to choose why medicines can be used. If they mitigate the incomfortable feeling,they can feel fullfilment. They may have less trust on doctors and believe they own have ability to use medicines. However, I think its drawbacks have more important influence. First, ordinary people have not professional medical knownledge. Though they can search information on internet, these information is hard to distiguash the avaliablity. Using improper medicines or treatments may be harm to their body and miss the best time of recovery. a small illness may become deteorite to patients. Second, the hospital need patients to make profits and improve relative technolohy.If most of people refuse to go to hospital, these doctors may can not support their family and turn to other occupation. Ocne serious illness infectious illness spread, the city have not enough doctors to save people's life.For example,in 2020, US was lack of doctors so the spread of Covid-19 caused millions death of people. To sum up,it may be argued that people try to use alternative medicines and treatments have benefits especially for those young people who are busy and have ability to find information.But visiting professional doctors is the best way to treat the disease.