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hi,is there any mistake in this essay?can you help me?The essay is:
I don't like most of bestsellers.In the first place,the reason why it is is that a bestseller always caters to most of people.Second, a bestseller is always written in easy words and thoughts. Plus, a bestseller is always provokable,even radical. Not to mention that there are thousands of classics which i can hardly read devoting my lifetime.
7. Jan. 2025 06:39
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Please place this entry in the 'exercise' section for correction.
7. Jan. 2025 07:54
Here’s the correction that I made.
I don't like most bestsellers. First, the reason for this is that bestsellers tend to cater to the masses. Second, they are often written in simple language and concepts. Additionally, bestsellers are usually designed to provoke, and sometimes even to be radical. Not to mention, there are thousands of classic works that I can hardly get through in a lifetime.
I added a few punctuation marks, and paraphrased some sentences.
7. Jan. 2025 19:53
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