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Hello e everyone! I'm here again and I will need your correctionđ
Carnaval is arriving and I am a Brazilian how does not like Carnavalđ€Ł It is everywhere... Like on tv, on the streets, people are talking about it all the time and it annoys me hahaha. On the street, carnaval leaves dirty paths... It smells urine, beer, and the next day we almost cannot walk on the streets... I don't like the music either. It's to inconvenient and I don't think it's unappropried for children. If you have ever been here to Brazil and on the Carnaval, tell me your experience! This is my point of view, most of Brazilians love Carnaval and I really respect it! It's just a matter of taste I think. I am a very introvert person, that's why I don't like crowded placesđ€ Have a wonderful day guys, thank you for reading it.âșïž
19. Feb. 2025 09:45
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Hello e everyone! I'm here again and I will need your correctionđ
Carnival is arriving and I am a Brazilian how does not like Carnivalđ€Ł. It can be seen everywhere, on tv, on the streets, people are talking about it all the time and it annoys me hahaha. On the streets, the celebration of carnival leaves a dirty path behind... It smells like urine, beer, and because of it, it is almost impossible walk the streets on the following day... I don't like the music either. It's to loud and I don't think it's appropriate for children. If you have ever been here to Brazil and attended the carnival, tell me about your experience! This is my point of view, most of Brazilians love carnival and I really respect it! It's just a matter of taste, I think. I am a very introverted person, that's why I don't like crowded placesđ€ Have a wonderful day guys, thank you for reading my post.âșïž
Good job, a good day to you too.
19. Feb. 2025 10:23
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Hello everyone! I'm here again and I will need your correctionđ carnival is
arriving and I am a Brazilian who does not like carnival đ€Ł It is everywhere...
Like on tv, on the streets, people are talking about it all the time and it
annoys me hahaha. On the street, carnival leaves the streets/pavements dirty, smelling of urine,
beer, and the next day we almost cannot walk on the streets... I don't like the
music either. It's too inconvenient (what do you mean here?) and I don't think it's appropriate for
children. If you have ever been here to Brazil and for the carnival, tell me your
experience! This is my point of view, most of Brazilians love carnival and I
really respect that! It's just a matter of taste I think. I am a very introvert
person, that's why I don't like crowded placesđ€ Have a wonderful day guys,
thank you for reading it.âșïž
Well done Bruna. Nice writing, and interesting opinions. I hope my corrections help. Would you like a quick 30 minute lesson? Simon
19. Feb. 2025 09:51
Hello everyone! I'm here again, and I will need your corrections. đ
Carnival is coming, and I am a Brazilian who does not like Carnival. đ€Ł It's everywhere... on TV, on the streets, and people talk about it all the time, which annoys me. Hahaha.
On the streets, Carnival leaves dirty paths... It smells like urine and beer, and the next day, we can barely walk outside. I don't like the music either. It's too inconvenient, and I don't think it's appropriate for children.
If you have ever been to Brazil during Carnival, tell me about your experience!
This is just my point of viewâmost Brazilians love Carnival, and I really respect that! It's just a matter of taste, I think. I am a very introverted person, which is why I don't like crowded places. đ€
Have a wonderful day, guys! Thank you for reading. âșïž
10. MĂ€rz 2025 19:46
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