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After knowing the essence of college enrollment expansion in China, I have found the shadow cast on me. In China, most of students study some lessons are not for improving their ability to deal with the world, but just for passing the test and get a higher mark, because they believe a good mark is competitive in job market. Now, I realize that is completely wrong. To join the society, I have to learn stuff that we can't get from college or university, which allow us to find a good job and achieve our value for life. I will graduate from my college in this summer holiday. From that time, there will be a journey of making money for travel abroad, especially the Tokyo city in Japan.
27. März 2024 15:04
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After knowing the essence of college enrollment expansion in China, I have found the shadow cast on me. In China, most students study some lessons not to improve their ability to deal with the world, but just to pass the test and get a higher mark, because they believe a good mark will make them competitive in the job market. Now, I realize that is completely wrong. To join society, I have to learn stuff that we can't get from college or university, which will allow us to find a good job and achieve our aims in life. I will graduate from my college this summer. From then on, there will be a journey of making money to travel abroad, especially Tokyo in Japan.
你好. Not bad. Be careful with the articles "the", "a" and "an". I did a podcast here on italki about when to use them, with some examples: https://www.italki.com/en/podcast/episode/coh1dyg1vpvszcpnwaecgn
27. März 2024
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