Thank you!

I appreciate that!

I fixed the text to sound a bit more professional (in my opinion), but I'm not expert when it comes to writing job applications etc. so you might be better off asking someone who knows more about this kind of stuff than I do.

I am working in the aircraft industry as a production coordinator in the logistics department.
My key duties and responsibilities include:
- planning and managing the production of A380 doors
- ensuring the smooth running of the production process
- ensuring that the parts needed are in stock
- resolving problems in(or 'with') production
- improving and developing production
Working in this job has required me to improve my communication, MS Office and SAP skills. I have found that I enjoy working under pressure and I am motivated to achieve results even in difficult circumstances. I am also highly organized and have plenty of initiative, which is advantageous in my job. I feel comfortable coordinating and managing systems, products and people in the workplace.

Thank you!

Here is the text:

I am working in the aircraft industry as coordinator of production with logistics department.
Key duties and responsibilities include:
- planning and managing production of A380 doors
- ensuring of smooth running of the production
- ensuring that parts for manufacture are in stock
- resolving problems in production
- improving and developing production
During this job I have improved my communication skills, MS office and SAP skills. I have found that I enjoy working under pressure and I am motivated to achieve results even in difficult circumstances. I am also highly organized and have plenty of initiative, which is suitable for my job. I really highly interest to feel comfortable coordinating and managing systems, products and people in the workplace.

I could give it a shot.