Dear Marry!
I have just received your letter and I’m glad to know that you have finished your semester at school. Your plans for this summer sounds great. I also begin making plans for my vacation.
I have lots of things to do this summer. First of all, I want to refresh my self after hard working for while. Thus, I decide to spend about a week on visiting Nha Trang which have many beautiful landscapes. After that, I will come back Da Nang city.I will find a part- time work in hotel so that I have more experiences.
Besides ,I will join an English listening course because I want to improve my listening skill. I still have many plans in my mind but I’m afraid that I don’t have enough time to make them.
Marry, you used to say me that you love Da Nang city and you really want to come Vietnam for somedays. I think it would be more great if you make it in this summer.I will meet you.I hope so.
I will be looking forward to your letter.
Give my love to your parents and brothers.
With love
Hao
Guess you're looking for some feedback.
The content is appropriate and rich. You did well writing the opening and closing.
Sentence-to-sentence coherence is good.
There is room for improvement in terms of organization, grammar and register, though.
hi! sorry i'm not marry my name's issam from morocco ;)
this is my exercise that i must do in my class.Yes. i wish but i think my knowledge isn't enough to do it.
Are you preparing for IELTS? :)
