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Shotaro
This week, the weather turned really cold all of a sudden. I was so surprised when I went out one morning— the air felt sharp and chilly, nothing like the warm, sunny days we had just a while ago. It seems like autumn hardly stayed at all. Before I could enjoy its soft golden light, falling leaves, and gentle coolness, autumn already felt like it was gone. Trees are losing their leaves fast. Mornings are darker, and nights come much earlier now. I had to take out my thick sweaters and warm socks right away. This cold feels more like early winter than late autumn. I really miss the nice sunlight, soft wind, and that calm, warm feeling that makes autumn so lovely. Even though this sudden change feels a little sad, I know each season has its own beauty. I will keep looking for small, nice things as the days get colder.

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The weather's gotten really cold all of a sudden this past week. I was so surprised when I went out one morning— the air felt sharp and chilly, nothing like the warm, sunny days we had just days ago. It feels like autumn barely even lasted. Before I could even enjoy its soft golden glow, falling leaves, and gentle coolness, autumn had already gone by. Leaves are now falling from trees rapidly. Mornings are darker, and nights come much earlier. I had to take out my thick sweaters and warm socks sooner than I expected. This coldness feels more like early winter than late autumn. I really miss the sun-kissed glow, soft breeze, and that calm, warm feeling that makes autumn so lovely. Even though this sudden change feels a little disappointing, I know each season has its own beauty. With that said, I will keep looking for the small, beautiful things as the days get colder.
This is very well written! Good job!! ペラペラです!I paraphrased some parts that felt a bit unnatural but I hope this captures what you're trying to express, as there were parts that I was not so sure with whether they align with what you're trying to say or not. I'm by no means an English teacher, just a native speaker, but feel free to ask me questions if you have any, and I'll do my best to answer. And if you're looking for a study partner, I'm also interested since I want to learn Japanese. 頑張ってね!

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