1. “Get all the experience I need” → “Gain the experience I need”: “Gain” sounds more natural in this context. 2. “To get my certifications” → “Earn my certifications”: “Earn” is the correct verb for certifications. 3. “Then I can transit into teaching” → “then transition into teaching”: “Transit” is incorrect here; “transition into” is the proper phrase. 4. “While I am volunteering, you see my determination and all that, you would train me” → “While volunteering, you will see my determination and dedication, and you will train me”: More professional and grammatically correct. “All that” was vague and unnecessary. 5. “I can volunteer for me to get into teaching” → “I can volunteer to gain the skills necessary to enter the teaching profession”: This makes the sentence clearer and more formal. Additionally, to strengthen your communication skills, you could benefit from private lessons with a tutor (like me!).