First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, my name is Vicky. I really want to talk with foreigner friends. Now I'm studying English to acheive my goal. If you want me to teach Koreans, I would be happy with that. :)

All in all, very good. Just a few minor mistakes~ ^__^

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hi, my name is Vicky. I really want to talk with foreigner friends. Now i'm studying english to acheive my goal. If you want me to teach Korean, I would be happy with that. :)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, my name is Vicky. I really want to talk with people who live in other countries. I'm studying English right now in order to acheive my goals. If you want me to teach you Korean, I would be happy to help.

 모멘트 추가 찾을 수 있으면, 제 글을 확인해 주세요?  제 레슨을 확인해주시겠어요?  우리는 친구가 될 있으면, 물론이죠 전 당신의 글도 수정할 것이다.

대문자를 공부하세요!

그건대문자로써야합니다.   

단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다.             

이건더자연스럽거나더일반적인방법의표현입니다.   

맞은구두점과띄어쓰기를사용해주세요.   

제코멘트나  제안입니다.     

열쇠색을낸시4366으로만들었습니다. 도움이됐으면좋겠습니다. 

Now I'm studying English to acheive my goal.

*achieve =]