komakam konid ba tarjome, lotfan
Tu in matn chanta kaleme va jomle motevaje nashodam:
.... be hesab miayand
.... fathe moqolan
.... shahre Sharqe an ruzgar resid
.... dar in mian
.... mosaferati be darune keyhane eslami hazer shavad
... afrude
... Ba in hal, mirase saadi shirazi hanuz ham donbal mishavad va hamchenan az un qadrdani mikonand
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komakam konid ba tarjome, lotfan
Tu in matn chanta kaleme va jomle motevaje nashodam:
.... be hesab miayand = They are considered
.... fathe moqolan = Mongol conquest
.... shahre Sharqe an ruzgar resid = ... arrived to the second famous city in those days.
.... dar in mian = meanwhile
.... mosaferati be darune keyhane eslami hazer shavad = he got ready to get through to the Muslim world
... afrude = ????
... Ba in hal, mirase saadi shirazi hanuz ham donbal mishavad va hamchenan az un qadrdani mikonand
= although, his career has been still followed and appreciated
let me know if you have any questions
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My Corrections: Green
My Examples: Pink
Tu in matn chanta kaleme va jomle (ro/ra) motevaje nashodam: ro: informal, ra: formal
1) .... be hesab miayand
be hesab avordan: to account/to consider/.. hesab kardan: to account/to calculate/...
Some examples for more clarifications:
- mitooni ruye man hesab koni: You can count on me.
- man pule ghaza ro/ra hesab kardam/pardakht kardam: I paid for the meal
- man ghasd daram yek hesab baz konam: I am going to open an account.
- man to ro adam be hesab nemiaram: I don not account/consider you as a human being
- mari kuri zane movaffaghi be hesab miayad: Marie Curie is accounted/considered as a successful woman.
- Saadi yeki az behtarin shaerha be hesab miayad: Saadi is considered as one of the greatest poets.
.... fathe moqolan: Mongol conquest
.... mashhurtarin shahre Sharqe an ruzgar resid: ...arrived to the most famous city in the east in those days.
.... dar in mian : Meanwhile
......un tavanest baraye mosaferati be darune keyhane eslami hazer shavad: He could get ready to get through the Islamic (Muslim) world. (Keyhan: universe, keyhanshenasi: cosmology)
... afrude : I think there should be an alternative word.
... Ba in hal, mirase saadi shirazi hanuz ham donbal mishavad va hamchenan az un qadrdani mikonand.
Although, Saadi Shirazi's heritage (refer to his valuable works) has been still followed and appreciated.
I have read the text, but there are some typos in writing:
Vatanash --- vatanesh is used in informal version.
pas as residan be bist salegi---residane be bist salegi is informal version.
oo ---un is used in informal version.
hengame mosaferatash be---hangami mosaferatash be
falsafi--felsefi
darvishan--dervishan
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