Please give me some adivice, this my TOEFLindependant writting, thx
I totally agree with the statement that universities and colleges give equal financial support to these two aspects for the following reasons.
First, sports and social activities are beneficial to students' health, physically and mentally. Students should use the facilities in the universities or colleges to build up their bodies. A good physical condition is basic to learn, to live. At my university, we have different places to exercise, we can see lots of students running, playing basketball, tennis, or soccer, etc. Due to enough exercise, we mostly have a good body. And during these activities, we can chat with our friends, we can make new friends with different people with the same hobby. We will establish a very healthy relationship with others. It helps us a lot, physically and mentally.
Second, classes and libraries will bring us the knowledge to enhance our professional skills. We go to universities or colleges to learn something new and meaningful. It is our goal and will. Universities and colleges provide us enough classes with the greatest teachers and profound knowledge, inspire us and give us opportunities to find ourselves. Libraries offered knowledge that descended from thousand years ago, the best part of this world, the essence of history. We can improve our search skills in finding the books that we need and chose the best content to enrich our brain. As for me, the library is the finest place in the university, I can find different books about education and culture. I used this material to find a better way to improve my teaching methods and teaching idea. It is very useful, I combined the knowledge with my experience to complete one class, it was a great job. I really appreciate the classes and libraries that the university provides.
Last but not least, a good university should have all these things to gain more fame. University and college are not a place that no one should know. In today's society, the university should build more infrastructure to attract more students, and provide more knowledgeable course to gain a reputation. If universities or colleges do not have these, it will hurt themselves.
In conclusion, I think it is very important to offer equal financial support to sports and social activities and classes and libraries.
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Please give me some adivice, this my TOEFLindependant writting, thx
I totally agree with the statement that universities and colleges should give equal financial support to the two following activities and facilities for the following reasons. [a dictionary would help you select the best appropriate word]
First, sports and social activities are beneficial to students' mental and physical health. Students should use the sports facilities in the universities or colleges to build up their bodies. A good physical condition is essential to learn and to live. At my university, we have different places to exercise, we see lots of students running, playing basketball, tennis, or soccer, etc. Due to doing enough exercise, we mostly have a good body. And during these activities, we can chat with our friends, we can make new friends with different people with the same hobby. We will establish a very healthy relationship with others. It helps us a lot, physically and mentally.
Second, classes and libraries will bring us the knowledge to enhance our professional skills. We go to universities or colleges to learn something new and meaningful. It is our goal and our will. Universities and colleges provide us enough classes with the greatest teachers and profound knowledge, inspire us and give us opportunities to find ourselves. Libraries offered knowledge that descended from thousands of years ago, namely the best part of this world's history We can improve our search skills in finding the books that we need and chose the best content to enrich our brain. As for me, the library is the finest place in the university, I can find different books about education and culture. I used this material to find a better way to improve my teaching methods and teaching ideology. It is very useful, I combined the knowledge with my experience to complete one class, it was a worthwhile job. I really appreciate the classes and libraries that the university provides.
Last but not least, a good university should have all these things to gain more fame. Universities and colleges are not a place that no one should know. In today's society, A university should build more infrastructure to attract more students, and provide more knowledgeable course to gain a reputation. If universities or colleges do not have these, They will damage themselves.
In conclusion, I think it is very important to offer equal financial support to sports and social activities and to classes and libraries. [and to = connects the two together 'spots and activities' and TO 'CLASSES AND LIBRARIES'
N.B it is 'our will' 'your will' their will' my will' NOT WILL<-- this = will do
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