Very good!  Pay attention to formatting protocol; capitol letters with months, and that pronoun when it's me... I never i!  Puncuating is cool because it maKEsmyJOBofREAdinGEASy!  OK?  Make my job of reading as easy as you possibly can and you will score big for these old eyes.  You studied a lot and you have learned a lot of English; that's great!  Now you must focus it on what you want, use the language to get what you want, go wherever you want to go, and most important... to have some fun.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Okay, here we go.
My name as you know is Olexander Syniuk, I was born 22th april 1995 so i am sixteen year old. My father told me that English was the 30% guarantee of success in the life, but then I was a child and I didnt uderstand a lot of things. So now i am teenager and i want to speak English freely, like it's my mother tongue. Also i want to progress in the university of English-learning form of education.
Many people have been saying that i heve a talent in English...
Okay maybe that's all for now but it is not end:)
(have you found errors? write about it)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Okay, here we go.
My name as you know is Olexander Syniuk, I was born 22th april 1995 so i am sixteen year old. My father told me that English was the 30% guarantee of success in the life, but then I was a child and I didnt uderstand a lot of things. So now i am teenager and i want to speak English freely, like it's my mother tongue. Also i want to progress in the university of English-learning form of education.
Many people have been saying that i have a talent in English...
Okay maybe that's all for now but it is not end:)
(have you found mistakes? write about it)