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Dear friends Dear friends, My name is Li Hua. Now I find some schoolmates eating snack during the mealtimes instead of meal. It's concerned about us health. As us students, we need enough nutrients. It's good of our body healthy. If we always eat snack, we will become ill easily. We should eat some fresh and green vegetable.Eating less or don't eat snack. Eating meal is very important. And we should do exercise everyday. Your's, Li Hua

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Dear friends

Dear friends,
My name is Li Hua. Now (not needed as you have written this in the present tense) I have found some of my schoolmates eating a snack during the mealtimes instead of a meal. It's I am concerned about us our health. As us students, we need enough nutrients. It's good of for our body and healthy. If we always eat snacks, we will become ill easily. We should eat some fresh and green vegetables.Students should E eating less or and don't not eat snacks. Eating a meal is very important. And we
should do exercise everyday.
Your's, Li Hua

This is a good effort, and I had no problem understanding it. You need to pay attention to the indefinite article "a" and the definite article "the." I assume your native language does not have articles. The "have found" insertion is passive voice, which you may not have studied yet.
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Dear friends

Dear friends,
My name is Li Hua. Now I am finding/ I'm noticing/ I'm seeing some schoolmates eating just snacks during the mealtimes instead of meals. I'm concerned about our health. As us students, we need enough nutrients. They are good for healthy bodies. (They are important for healthy bodies) If we always eat just snacks, we will become ill easily. We should eat some fresh green vegetables and eat fewer or no snacks.
Eating measl is very important. And we should do exercise every day.
Yours, Li Hua

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