A difficult awakening
With hesitation, she wearily dragged herself out of the bed. Her dizziness and cloudy mind were the sign that she overslept. The cat was miaowling desperately outside her bedroom from hunger, it had been 12 hours since he last ate and he couldn’t wait any longer.
She opened the door and the cat rubbed on her leg, his eyes were begging for food. She walked erratically to the kitchen and filled up his bowl. Now it was time to replenish her stomach with a hearty breakfast. Some scrumble eggs, toasted bread and fresh orange juice would have brought her back to life.
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A difficult awakening
With hesitation, she wearily dragged herself out of the bed. Her dizziness and cloudy mind were the signs that she overslept. The cat was miaowling meowing desperately outside her bedroom from hunger. It had been 12 hours since he had last eaten and he couldn’t wait any longer.
She opened the door and the cat rubbed on her leg, his eyes were begging for food. She walked erratically to the kitchen and filled up his bowl. Now it was time to replenish her stomach with a hearty breakfast. Some scrambled eggs, toasted bread and fresh orange juice would have brought bring her back to life.
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