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As is shown above,in the left picture,a man has putted "BECKHAM" on his face,while in the right drawing,another man is doing a "BECKHAM" hairstyle similarly.Undoubtedly,the artist is calling attention to a prevalent social phenomenon of the worship to an idol.
As is vividly shown above in the drawing,two man,who abandoning their stand sticks and bandaging their missed legs,are supporting each other to go forward.Undoubtedly, the artist is attempting to call attention to a prevalent social phenomenon of a growing number of people are seeking to cooperate to reach the same goal.
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Please help me review it💖
As is shown above ,in the left picture (or photo), a man has putted "BECKHAM" on his face [1], while in the right drawing, another man is doing a "BECKHAM" hairstyle similarly. Undoubtedly, the artist photographer [2] is calling attention to a the prevalent social phenomenon of the worshipping to an idol.
[1] 'Put' is the past tense of 'put'. It's uncertain whether the man wrote that on his face so maybe you could consider: ... a man has "BECKHAM" written on his face.
[2] A person who takes a photograph is a photographer. Artists illustrate, draw, paint, etc.
As is vividly shown above in the drawing (or cartoon), two men, who have abandoned their stand sticks [3] and bandaged their missing [4] legs, are supporting each other to go forward. Undoubtedly, the artist is attempting to call attention to a the prevalent social phenomenon of a growing number of people are seeking to cooperate to reach the same goal.
[3] I'm not sure what this is, maybe 'walking sticks' or 'hiking poles'. I can't see the image well enough to tell.
[4] Perhaps 'amputated'?
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