Wählen Sie aus verschiedenen Englisch Lehrkräften für ...
andyroman
Rabbit City Once upon a time there was a city called rabbit city. Rabbit city has many rabbits, they has many color, personality and color.The president of rabbit city was called Jody rabbit. Hehas very wite feather and his personality was very pedant and he was very old. He has 2 child,one called Happy bonnie and one called Funny bonnie. Happy bonnie was a girl she has pink feather and she was friendy. Funny bonnie was a boy he has a brown feather and he was very funny. The bad guy in rabbit city was called bad bad rabbit. He was bad and feather was very ulgy. One day he came to the rabbit city, he said ''I will fight with the rabbit in city.''The rabbit in city were feel scared. Happy bonnie and Funny bonnie said''We will fight with you.'' When rabbits feel scared,Happy bonnie and Funny bonnie came back. The rabbits jump and yell. They won.

Korrekturen · 4

1
Rabbit City

Once upon a time there was a city called Rabbit City. Rabbit City had many rabbits, who were of many colours and personalities.The president of Rabbit City was called Jody Rabbit. He had very white fur, he was very pedantic and he was very old. He had 2 children, one called Happy Bunny and one called Funny Bunny. Happy Bunny was a girl who had pink fur and she was friendy. Funny Bunny was a boy who had brown fur and he was very funny. The bad guy in Rabbit City was called Terrible Rabbit. He was bad and his fur was very ugly. One day he came to the rabbit city and he said ''I will fight with the rabbits in the city.'' The rabbits in the city were feeling scared. Happy Bunny and Funny Bunny said ''We will fight with you.'' When the rabbits felt scared, Happy Bunny and Funny Bunny came back. The rabbits jumped and yelled. They had won.
1
Rabbit City

Once upon a time there was a city called Rabbit City. Rabbit City had many rabbits. They had many colors and personalities.The president of Rabbit City was called Jody Rabbit. He had very white fur, and he was very pedantic and old. He had 2 children, one called Happy Bunny (?) and one called Funny Bunny. Happy Bunny was a girl. She had pink fur and was friendly. Funny Bunny was a boy. He had brown fur and was very funny. The bad guy in Rabbit City was called Bad Bad Rabbit. He was bad and his fur was very ugly. One day, he came to Rabbit City and said ''I will fight the rabbits in the city.'' The rabbits in the city felt scared. Happy Bunny and Funny Bunny said ''We will fight you.'' The rabbits still felt very scared when Happy Bunny and Funny Bunny finally came back. The rabbits then jumped and cheered. They won!

Möchten Sie schneller voran kommen?

Treten Sie dieser Lern-Community bei und testen Sie kostenlose Übungen!

Verpassen Sie nicht die Gelegenheit, bequem von zu Hause aus eine Sprache zu lernen. Stöbern Sie in unserer Auswahl an erfahrenen Sprachlehrern und melden Sie sich jetzt zu Ihrer ersten Unterrichtsstunde an!

Heute mit dem Lernen beginnen