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Hometown Could you help me correct my mistakes?thanks! I am from shanwei. My hometown is by the sea and is about a 3-hour drive from the capital of Guangdong. In shanwei, there are many tasty snacks and seafood. For example, you can enjoy many kinds of dumplings here. Guangdong is famous for delicious soup and Porridge. I especially like shrimp porridge. My favorite food is Salted fish which only coastal cities have. But I stay in chengdu for 10 months a year so I miss it very much. I think my hometown is a good place to work and live because its air is so clean and the life is less stressful. The famous scenic spot is Lotus Hill which is the highest peak along the east coast of Guangdong. The main senic spots on the mountain include jiming Temple, yunlian Temple and so on. We can have vegetarian food with no meat there. A panoramic view of the city can be seen at the top of the mountain.

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Could you help me correct my mistakes?thanks!

I am from Shanwei. My hometown is by the sea side and is about a 3-hour drive from the capital (of ?) Guangdong. In Shanwei, tasty snacks and seafood are found in abundance. For example, you one can enjoy many kinds of dumplings here. Guangdong is famous for delicious soup and Porridge. I especially like shrimp porridge. My favorite food is Salted fish which is only available on coastal cities have. But As I stay in Chengdu for 10 months a year, so I miss it very much.
I think my hometown is a good place to work and live in because its air is so clean and the life is less stressful. The famous scenic spot is Lotus Hill which is the highest peak along the east coast of Guangdong. The main scenic spots on the mountain include jiming Temple and yunlian Temple and so on among others. We can have a vegetarian food with no meat there. A panoramic view of the city can be seen at from the top of the mountain.

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