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Transportation Could you help me correct my mistakes？thanks！ I definitely have a soft spot for high-speed train. Its head looks like a bullet. When I take a train, I can always set out on time and arrive my destination on time or even early. Instead, when I take a plane, the flight sometimes delays and I feel terrible because my ears pop. I think high-speed train is comfortable and steady. I can put a cup of water on table and the water won’t splash. I can remember clearly that when I first took a train, I was so excited to see what a fast train. Train attendant handed out a box of snack to us and I was so delighted.

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Could you help me correct my mistakes？Thanks！

I definitely have a soft spot for high-speed trains. Its Their heads looks like a bullets. When I take a train, I can always set out off on time and arrive at my destination on time or even early earlier. Instead However, when I take a plane, the flight is sometimes delays and delayed. I also feel terrible because my ears pop. I think high-speed trains is are comfortable and steady. I can put place a cup of water on table and the water won’t splash without the water splashing. I can clearly remember clearly that when I first took a train one, I was so excited to see what such a fast train. The train attendant handed out a box of snacks to us and - I was so delighted.!

Good work.

  1. My suggestion in using the indefinite pronoun 'one' at one point in your text is meant to reduce the need to repeat the 'train' so often.
  2. Also: when referring to things in general, one usually refers to them in the plural. Example: 'High-speed trains' or 'checkered shirts' or 'yellow cars'. When evaluating these in general, use the plural.
  3. A few mistakes appeared in your sentence composition. It is be sometimes best to break the sentences up, in order to more easily describe the story. Hearing natives speak and reading more material in English will make these principles more obvious to you.

I hope this helps!

Best regards,

Jules Barkan
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Could you help me correct my mistakes？thanks！

I definitely have a soft spot for high-speed trains. Its head looks like a bullet. When I take a train, I can always set out depart on time and arrive at my destination on time or even early. Instead, when I take a plane, the flight sometimes has delays and I feel terrible because my ears pop. I think a high-speed train is comfortable and steady. I can put a cup of water on the table and the water won’t splash. I can remember clearly that when I first took a train, I was so excited to see what a fast train was like. The train attendant handed out a box of snacks to us and I was so delighted.
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Could you help me correct my mistakes？Thanks！

I definitely have a soft spot for the high-speed train. It's head looks like a bullet. When I take a the train, I can always set out off on time and arrive at my destination on time or even early. Instead, When I take a plane instead, the flight is sometimes delayed and I feel terrible because my ears pop. I think that the high-speed train is comfortable and steady. I can put a cup of water on the table and the water won’t splash. I can remember clearly that when I first took a train, I was so excited to see what a fast train was like. The train attendant handed out a box of snacks to us and I was so delighted.

Nice paragraph! Remember to use the word 'the', e.g. the train attendant, the high-speed train, the table.

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