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아파! ㅠ_ㅠ [한국어 엔트리] 오늘 의사에게 갔다. 나는 아픈 기회를 얻었습니다. 수요일에 다시 가니! 오늘도 내 친구 제레미의 생일입니다... 생일 축하합니다 생일 축하합니다 사랑하는 제레미씨~ 생일 축하합니다~~~! 우리는 수년 동안 친구가되었을. 그 날이 재미 희망!^0^ 음 ...베살리우스 좋은 밴드입니다! 내가 좋아하는 일본어 밴드 중 하나. 숙 제일...아무도 미국에 온지 ㅜ.ㅠ 안녕~ ___________________________________________ [English Entry; may differ a bit from the top!(My Korean is reaaaally limited)] Today I went to the doctor's...the shot they gave me hurt like heck! Like seriously, I felt the pain for a half hour after it was done! ;.; I have to go back on Wednesday too!!!! D: It's my friend Jeremy's birthday today ^^; Usually in my home we sing "Sto Lat", the Polish version of "Happy Birthday" but I enjoy singing the Korean now too! :3 생일 축하합니다! Hehe. I hope he does have a fun day though since I can't see him. Err..I've been listening to a lot of Versailles today, I don't know why. They're a Japanese band I've liked for a few years now. Their songs are always beautiful. My favorite Japanese band is SuG, I love Takeru...he's like a kitten. :3[btw, Idk if I translated their names well above ^^;]. I really like Visual Kei, it's really neat to look at, and not something you see often out of Japan. I don't like Japanese Pop music much though, I prefer the Rock/Metal. Like how in Korea I prefer the Korean Pop groups and I don't like the Rock/Metal much except for a select few.[TRAX being one (:]. I wish some of the groups/bands would come to America! 포미닛(4minute), 투애니원(2NE1), 에프티 아일랜드(F.T. Island), being one's I wouldn't miss. I missed 보아(BoA) because she wasn't anywhere near me, 원더걸스(Wonder Girls) too! I want to see at least one of them in my lifetime. Byebye until later! <3
22. Aug. 2011 18:16
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아파! ㅠ_ㅠ

[한국어 엔트리]
오늘 의사에게 갔습니다. 나는 아픈 기회를 얻었습니다. 수요일에 다시 가야 합니다!
오늘 내 친구 제레미의 생일입니다...
오늘은 제 친구 제레미의 생일입니다.

생일 축하합니다
생일 축하합니다
사랑하는 제레미씨~
생일 축하합니다~~~!

우리는 수년오랫동안 친구가되었을 사이로 지내고 있습니다.
그날 재미있게 보내길 희망하고 있습니다!^0^
생일을 재미있게 보냈으면 합니다.

음 ...베살리우스르사유(Versailles,ヴェルサイユ) 좋은 밴드입니다!
내가 좋아하는 일본밴드 중 하나입니다.
제일 슬픈 건...그들 중 아무도 미국에 (공연하러) 았습니다 ㅜ.ㅠ

안녕~

___________________________________________

[English Entry; may differ a bit from the top!(My Korean is reaaaally limited)]

Today I went to the doctor's...the shot they gave me hurt like heck! Like seriously, I felt the pain for a half hour after it was done! ;.; I have to go back on Wednesday too!!!! D:

It's my friend Jeremy's birthday today ^^; Usually in my home we sing "Sto Lat", the Polish version of "Happy Birthday" but I enjoy singing the Korean now too! :3 생일 축하합니다! Hehe. I hope he does have a fun day though since I can't see him.

Err..I've been listening to a lot of Versailles today, I don't know why. They're a Japanese band I've liked for a few years now. Their songs are always beautiful. My favorite Japanese band is SuG, I love Takeru...he's like a kitten. :3[btw, Idk if I translated their names well above ^^;]. I really like Visual Kei, it's really neat to look at, and not something you see often out of Japan. I don't like Japanese Pop music much though, I prefer the Rock/Metal. Like how in Korea I prefer the Korean Pop groups and I don't like the Rock/Metal much except for a select few.[TRAX being one (:]. I wish some of the groups/bands would come to America! 포미닛(4minute), 투애니원(2NE1), 에프티 아일랜드(F.T. Island), being one's I wouldn't miss. I missed 보아(BoA) because she wasn't anywhere near me, 원더걸스(Wonder Girls) too! I want to see at least one of them in my lifetime.

Byebye until later! <3

\^o^/

22. August 2011
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