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Dear Mr. O’Neil,
I would explain to you my personal situation, I’m sure that you could understand it. As you known, I have had a car accident two months ago and after that I was operated to my shoulder. The doctor told me that I would be better after a few months but now nothing seems to be better.
So, I would told you the permission to take a day off from work.
I have the necessity to do a medical visit and it will probably the next Wednesday.
Therefore, I thought that we could anticipated the meeting with the staff on this Wednesday on 9. 30 a.m. then the video conference at the 2 p.m.
Also, I was thinking if were good for you that we could participated the phone call to a customer in Turkey on next Monday. What do you think about it?
I hope you could understand my serious healty situation.
I attend your response.
Best Regards
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Dear Mr. O’Neil,
I would like to explain my personal situation to you. I’m sure that you can understand. As you know, I was in a car accident two months ago, and after that I had surgery on my shoulder. The doctor told me that I would be better after a few months, but nothing seems to be better.
So, I would like permission to take a day off from work for a medical visit, probably next Wednesday.
Therefore, I thought that we could have the staff meeting this Wednesday at 9:30 a.m., then the video conference at 2 p.m.
Also, I was thinking that if were good for you, we could participate in the phone call with a customer in Turkey next Monday. What do you think about it?
I hope you can understand my serious health situation. I await your response.
Best Regards
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