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Could you please correct my writing? Satori by Don Winslow, chapters 100-104 From chapter 100 we know that Haverford arrived in Saigon. He liked Saigon because this city was like Paris in many ways, but the weather was much better here. But Haverford hoped that he won’t be here very long because he didn't like the current geopolitical situation, especially in this region, and he didn't want to participate in the war. So Haverford waited for Nicholai Hel and hoped he would arrive soon enough. In chapter 101 Nicholai went to the place where weapons were stored, Tasser and his crew offloaded the cargo onto the shore, Nicholai said goodbye to Tasser and Tasser and his men left. Then the truck with Bay Vien arrived to take the cargo. In chapter 102 the truck with the weapons rolled out of the town, with Nicholai and Bay Vien aboard the vehicle. The road through the mountains was long and arduous but eventually they arrived to some French military base with an airstrip. Nicholai and Bay Vien were met by Captain Antoine Signavi. He offered them beer and they discussed business. Bay Vien and Nicholai wanted to fly with the cargo, Captain Signavi hesitated for some time but then he After the business was settled, Captain Signavi invited Bay Vien and Nicholai to dinner tonight. At the evening they had a delicious dinner together and then they went to sleep. But in the middle of the night Nicholai woke up suddenly. He heard some man approached. Nicholai saved Bay Vien knocking him off the bad onto the floor, then went outside. The killer tried to run but was shot. Bay Vien said to Nicholai that he owed him. In chapter 103 Colonel Yu reported to General Liu that the Viet Minh agent who was supposed to meet Nicholai was killed. Colonel Yu was deeply troubled and wondered if Nicholay was in trouble or betrayed him. In chapter 104 the plane with Nicholai and Bay Vien aboard flied to Saigon. Nicholai watched at the landscape below and understood that there was no way he could make this way with the weapons by ground or river routes because there were too much military forces there. The plane landed not in Saigon, but at a military base. Crates of opium and rocket launchers were loaded in trucks. Nicholai demanded payment for the weapons. Bay Vien promised that he would pay and arranged a meeting the next day in his casino.

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Could you please correct my writing?

Satori by Don Winslow, chapters 100-104

From chapter 100, we know that Haverford arrived in Saigon. He liked Saigon because this city was like Paris in many ways, but the weather was much better here. But Haverford hoped that he wouldn't be here for very long because he didn't like the current geopolitical situation, especially in this region, and he didn't want to participate in the war. So Haverford waited for Nicholai Hel and hoped he would arrive soon enough.

In chapter 101, Nicholai went to the place where weapons were stored. Tasser and his crew offloaded the cargo onto the shore, Nicholai said goodbye to Tasser, and Tasser and his men left. Then the truck with Bay Vien arrived to take the cargo.

In chapter 102, the truck with the weapons rolled out of the town with Nicholai and Bay Vien aboard the vehicle. The road through the mountains was long and arduous, but eventually they arrived at some French military base with an airstrip. Nicholai and Bay Vien were met by Captain Antoine Signavi. He offered them beer and they discussed business. Bay Vien and Nicholai wanted to fly with the cargo, Captain Signavi hesitated for some time, but then he (YOU FORGOT TO FINISH THE SENTENCE! IT'S OK) After the business was settled, Captain Signavi invited Bay Vien and Nicholai to dinner that night. In the evening, they had a delicious dinner together and then they went to sleep.

But in the middle of the night, Nicholai woke up suddenly. He heard some man approaching. Nicholai saved Bay Vien knocking him off the bed onto the floor, then went outside. The killer tried to run but was shot. Bay Vien said to Nicholai that he owed him.

In chapter 103, Colonel Yu reported to General Liu that the Viet Minh agent who was supposed to meet Nicholai was killed. Colonel Yu was deeply troubled and wondered if Nicholai was in trouble or betrayed him.

In chapter 104, the plane with Nicholai and Bay Vien aboard flied to Saigon. Nicholai looked at the landscape below and understood that there was no way he could make this way with the weapons by ground or river routes because there were too many military forces there. The plane landed not in Saigon, but at a military base. Crates of opium and rocket launchers were loaded into the trucks. Nicholai demanded payment for the weapons. Bay Vien promised that he would pay and arranged a meeting the next day in his casino.

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