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Everyday, I do the same things. My knees already aching, because for almost 2 months I can not to go to gym or take a walk in a square, for example. I spent, approximately, 15 hours in front a computer working and studying per day. Right now, I am trying to improve my english, because I think that there are more opportunities around the world to get a job as systems developer, and I believe that english can help me. Most of my friends already got a remote job, some of them working in a big company, like microsoft.
Therefore, I would like your help to correct this text, I will appreciate. Thanks a lot. If I can help you in any thing, please let me know.
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Everyday...
Everyday I do the same things. My knees already ache, because for almost 2 months I have not been able to go to the gym or take a walk in a square, for example. I spend approximately 15 hours in front of a computer working and studying each day. Right now, I am trying to improve my English, because I think that there are more opportunities around the world to get a job as systems developer, and I believe that English can help me. Most of my friends already have a remote job, some of them are working in big companies, like Microsoft.
Therefore, I would like your help to correct this text. I would appreciate it. Thanks a lot. If I can help you in any way, please let me know.
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Everyday...
Everyday, I do the same things. My knees are already aching, because for almost 2 months I can not have not been able to go to the gym or take a walk in a square, for example. I spend approximately 15 hours in front of a computer working and studying per day. Right now, I am trying to improve my English, because I think that there are more international opportunities around the world to get a job as systems developer, and I believe that English can help me. Most of my friends already got a have remote jobs, with some of them working in a big companys, like microsoft.
Therefore, I would like your help to correct this text, I will appreciate it. Thanks a lot. If I can help you in anything, please let me know.
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Every Day*/**/***
Every day, I do the same thing: I spend approximately 15 hours in front a computer both working and studying per day. For almost the past 2 months I have not, as examples, gone to the gym or taken a walk in a park because my knees are already stiff and aching from sitting so much.
Right now, I am trying to improve my English, as I think that if I can, there will be more job opportunities for me around the world as a Systems developer. In that respect, knowing more of the language will be a huge first step toward helping me reach my goals. Most of my friends have already secured remote jobs, and some of them even work for a big company, like Microsoft, all because they know more English than I do.
Therefore, I would like your help in correcting this text. It will definitely be much appreciated, and I simply could not thank you enough if you do. If I can help you with anything in return, please let me know.
Hi, Carneiro. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. My sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you, Jonathan.
*The word, “everyday” means common or normal, as in “Eating breakfast is an everyday meal.” The phrase, “every day” means “each day,” so while they sound the same, their meanings are quite different.
**We use the word, “because” to explain something. For example, “The glass vase broke because it fell off the table.” The way you used it, as well as your job title, was not so clear... (and required that I modify your text a bit...).
***We capitalize proper nouns such as English and Microsoft.
Finally, the below is a link that contains many aspects of English that might benefit you:
Best of luck!
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