So Very hot summer in the Korea.^__^

These day In Korean, it is the rainy season and the hot whether weather period.  (OR:  It is the rainy and hot season in Korea.)
Do you make many friends on the italki?
I have been made several good friends in this here.^^
Everyone is a good friends and then also a skilled teachers.
I hope that you makes good friends. and help someone each other.
I also wanna want to learn English and Mandarin.
and If you wanna want to learn Korean, I will teach for you.
register Add me and contact me.
I have a Skype id.^^  Send a message for to me.^^
Good luck.~

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So hot summer in korea.^__^

These days, korean is in raining season and hot whether period. 
have  you make many friends in the italki?
I have made several good friends here.^^
Everyone is good friends and then skillful teachers.
I hope that you have made good friends. and help someone else.
I also wanna to learn english and mandarin.
and If u wanna to learn korean, I will teach you.
register me and contact me.
I have skype id.^^send message for me.^^
good luck~

So hot summer in the korea.^__^

These day Korea is in the rainy season and hot whether period.
Have you made many friends here in the italki?
I have been made several good friends in this here.^^
Everyone here is a good friends and then a skilled teachers.
I hope that you makes good friends. and help someone here. each other.
I also want to learn English and Mandarin.
and If you want to learn Korean, I will teach for you.
Register me and contact me.
I have Skype id.^^Send a message to me.^^
Good luck~

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*** Study prepositions and articles.  (of , to, for ---- a, an, the)