Three Days to See
This is the homework for my English class.
I know this composition has some mistakes on tense....So please give me some suggestions~ :) ==
I have been accustomed to live in this world in a quite normal way,as a quite average man. Life means nothing special to me,and seldom have I got flushed or even furious. However,one diagnosis broke my routine.
It came out all of sudden. I just walked out of the hospital with my eyes blanked;the doctor told me that I would lose my eyesight in 3 days! "I'm sorry,but there's nothing I could help",the old man said sincerelly. Shock,fear and doubt have filled up my mind. I couldn't help sinking into agonized thought: What should I do?
The first day I wake up in the morning lying in bed studying one sophisticated pattern on the ceiling. It suddenly occurs to me that I was gifted for my eyesight which I did not cherish. Tremendous TV shows, pointless computer surfings and other unnecessary things have taken up too much space in my life. There's a whisper inside: " I was wrong,I was totally wrong." Then I am overwhelmed by guilty and sorrow.One desire bursts out all of sudden:Fly home and gaze at my parents' faces.And I make it at once. I tell them straightforward how badly I miss them.And I count every wrinkle on their faces,which demonstrates my deepest love for them. I memorize their twinkling eyes which are enough for me to liver over for my whole life.
As the second day succeeds, I hang out admiring every subtle beauty. Sniffing at lovely flowers, I sit and study the delicate petal. I'd like to see young girls' glossy shinning hair, their colorful skirts, and their sweetest smiles. I bear this in mind so as to impress myself with the vigor of life. I gaze at one infant's face, touch his skin gently and kiss his cheeks. Every tree, every street and even every telegraph pole make me amazed. I realize that this peaceful world is always full of surprise and happiness, while dwell on oneself too much may confine you to a narrow path.
On the third day, I go mountain climbing,alone,with a light heart. I appreciate the gentle freeze, the warm sunshine and the pleasant fragrance. I am happy and energetic for I have discovered the secret of life which has long confused me. I used to overlook the beauty I could have reached out for and take what I already have for granted, How foolish I was! As long as I open my eyes to the world, I can experience deepest happiness.(No room left...)
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(continue..)Eventually I stand on the top of the mountain gazing at the magnificent flaming setting sun. Tears stream down my face for I'm so content. The guilt for the past and the sorrow for the future which have preyed on my mind terribly totally vanish at this moment. My heart is overflowing with awe and gratitude. I'll no longer be consumed with fear or hopelessness.
In the course of life, I have been tripped up. Unfortunately I'm deprived of eyesight. But fortunately this misery has enlightened me. Those beautiful memories are enough for me to live over for the rest of life. When night falls, I lie on the grass observing the misterious starry sky for the last time, then close my eyes waiting for that moment to come.
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