First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hi,i'm a guy from china.i'm a college student,and i'm girl 19.i'd like to improve my english by italki.^ ^ so,as change maybe i can tell you something interesting in my life.so just make friend with me!

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MY SUGGESTION:

Hi. I'm a 19 year old female college student from China.  I'd like to improve my English using italki.  Perhaps I can tell you something interesting about my life.  Please make me a friend!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, I'm a girl (if you say "I'm a guy" it means that you are a boy, usually) from China. I'm a college student, and I'm a 19-year-old girl. I'd like to improve my English by using italki.^ ^ So, as change maybe I can tell you something interesting in about my life. So just make friend with me you can add me as a friend!