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Is life miserable, or a fairy tale?
Anyone can start their own story with "once upon a time", but some don't want to. They can't start it with in a "near time lived"..........
Everyone in this world has their own story but for some, how they live life every day, why, I don't know. Perhaps to learn from life, or to realize what our mistakes are and correct them, not torepeat them. Well, we can fight our destiny, and sometimes it just follows us in every step that we take, because that's when we learn, we grow, we smell, we touch...
My readers and friends in italki, tell me what you think about this poem that I wrote.
I open my eyes in fear,
the sun rises and saves you from the dark.
I close doors and windows without knowing what's inside.
Dear sun, dear wind, dear rain,
give me the power to transform myself again
and to save myself from the nothingness.
I've become a baby's crythat gives
me hope that the moon will forgive me.
P.S.
Tell me what you think about it.
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