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Write about your family...My family is big very big.I have ten brothers and sisters.my mother married two times so it stay so big. Was very good when small because did have very children for play soccer basketball volei but my mother was very worried.
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My family is big very big.
or My family is big -- very big. (for emphasis)
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My family is big very big. I have ten brothers and sisters. My mother married two times. (1) so it stay so big It (2) was very good when I (2) was small because did have very children there were many children around for to (3) play soccer, basketball, and volleyball, (4) but my mother was very worried. (5)
1. I crossed out the second half of this sentence because it is redundant.
2. Missing subject.
3. to + verb
4. When listing things, separate with commas, and write "and" before the last item.
5. This last sentence is incomplete. Why was your mother worried?
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