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Jane
Ordinary day Today is a ordinary day,I spent a lot of time study English, I read several English articles. Also,I listened music, did some housework, and I had a afternoon nap. The weather was sunny, very lovely. Now it's cloudy, it will rain in the evening, I think. Of course, the day haven't over, but I like the day, I like spend time with my parents, it's nice. I love my family and my dad and mum, I think they are best parents in the world. Thanks them what give me great love! I love my life, I'm satisfied.

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..an ordinary day

Today is a ordinary day. I have spent a lot of time studying English.

...the day isn't over,

I like to spend time...

Thanks them for giving me their love! I'm happy.

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I know English a little so don't take my correction too serious :)

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You've done very well! 

I think there are some things you need to pay attention to, though :)

 

Ordinary day

Today is an ordinary day,I have spent a lot of time studying English, I have read several English articles. Also,I have listened to music, I have done some housework, and I had an afternoon nap. The weather was sunny, very lovely. Now it's cloudy, it will rain in the evening, I think. 
Of course, the day isn't over, but I like this day, I like spending time with my parents, it's nice. I love my family and my dad and mum, I think they are the best parents in the world. I thank them for giving me great love! I love my life, I'm satisfied.

 

- I think that Present Perfect would be more appropriate because the time period isn't finished 

- Pay attention to the gerund after certain verbs ( like ) or verbs with preposition ( thank someone for )

- To form the superlative, the compared term ( adjective or adverb - "best" is your case) must be preceded by the definite article "the"

 

I'm here if you have any questions ;)

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