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About me i always thik about how improve my english. I tried different way for improve it. However i felt the lack of something. i dont konow about but it is there. i studied a university education in english. even so my english is bad .my vocabulary has technical englis words. another thing , i need want to speak english anyone.my situation of difficult. I hope somebody help me. thx.
21. Juli 2012 12:30
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thank you for your help.
21. Juli 2012
From my opinion that language will be good if we do the practice, some quote saying "practice make perfect " thus the only way you can improve your language. It was working for me once I learn English. Fortunately, i found someone who able to teach me & we make daily conversation (he was from US) so no better way learning language from native speaker & practice..... good luck ^_^
21. Juli 2012
My advice to you is to read as much as you can. Read books, newspapers, and watch films.. etc. Wishing you all the best! =)
21. Juli 2012


I
 always think about how ways to improve my English.

I always think about ways to improve my English.


I tried different ways for to improve it. However, I felt the lack of something.

I tried (many / a few) different ways, but even though, I feel something's missing.

- Add "many" or "a few" to sound more fluent.

- Do not repeat (to improve it) you already mentioned it in your first sentence.

- I feel something's missing, is a better way to express I felt the lack of something.


I don't konow about but it is there.

Badly expressed, it's difficult to understand what you mean, so it's better to delete it.


I studied at university education in english, even so though my English is still bad.

I even studied at university in English, but my English hasn't improved. 

Note the changes I have made in order to sound more fluent.


My vocabulary has technical English words.

This sentence does not make sense. 

 

Another thingI (need / want) to speak English with anyone.

In addition, I need to practice speaking English with someone.

- Moreover / In addition / Furthermore are all better words to use than another thing.

- You either use "need" or "want" .. not both ! 

- You need to "practice speaking" not just "to speak".

- "Someone" is used even if you don't mind "anyone".


My situation of is difficult. I hope that somebody helps me. thx.

My situation is difficult. I hope that somebody helps me. 

 

After corrections:

I always think about ways to improve my English. I tried (many / a few) different ways, but even though, I feel something's missing. I even studied at university in English, but my English hasn't improved. In addition, I need to practice speaking English with someone. My situation is difficult. I hope that somebody helps me. 

 

21. Juli 2012
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