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I LOVE MY FOREIGN CLASSMATES I Love My Foreign Classmates There are several foreign students in my class. Lee and Chen are Chinese,but they are not from China. They're from Japan. They're overseas Chinese. John is Korean. He is from Seoul. He's a overseas student. He is handsome. I love him very much. But he not like me. Because I have not blue eyes and golden hair.
29. Aug. 2010 05:33
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The word 'foreign' is not very polite. It's not a good translation of 外国人. International student, exchange student, or others would be better. "foreign" is not completely rude, but it's also not completely polite. :)
29. August 2010

I LOVE MY FOREIGN CLASSMATES

I Love My Foreign Classmates

There are several foreign students in my class.
Lee and Chen are Chinese,but they are not from China. They're from Japan. They're overseas Chinese.
John is Korean. He is from Seoul. He's an overseas student. He is handsome. I love him very much.
But he does not like me because I don't have<strike> not</strike> blue eyes and golden hair.


-- Great!! Just keep it up. ^^
29. August 2010
I love your words, girl.
29. August 2010
I Love My International Student Classmates

There are several international students in my class. Lee and Chen are ethnic Chinese,but they live in Japan. John is a Korean from Seoul. He is handsome and I love him very much. But, he does not seem to like me, because, I don't have blue eyes and golden hair.

Notes:
1. a 'International Student' is a student from another country. Foreign student is not the right term here. I have observed that the Chinese use the word 'foreign' frequently to denote people from other countries.

2. It is not right to break a sentence and start from a new line, unless you want to start a new paragraph.

Personal Notes:
1. I have observed the same tendency among East Asian girls (Chinese, Japanese etc). They are attracted to white guys and think white guys to be superior to us. Just my observation. :-)
2. Being handsome does not qualify someone to be a good person and a good boyfriend / husband :-)


29. August 2010

I LOVE MY FOREIGN CLASSMATES

I Love My Foreign Classmates

There are several foreign students in my class.
Lee and Chen are Chinese,but they are not from China. They're from Japan. They're overseas Chinese.
John is Korean. He is from Seoul. He's an overseas student. He is handsome. I love him very much.
But he not like me. Because I don't have<strike> not</strike> blue eyes and golden hair.
29. August 2010
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