sunflower's notebook entry: Aug 30, 2010
I made the grape wine by myself yestoday.But i need to wait at least 4 months to taste my wine.
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sunflower's notebook entry: Aug 30, 2010
Yesterday, I made some wine from grapes all by myself, but I have to wait for four months before I am able to drink it to see find out whether I was successful.0
My friends said my wine has broken .The reason is that the bottle was not sealed enough and let air came in. It was made me sad . So I made it again yesterday and sealed the cap carefully , hope have a good result.
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That's ok!
I'll send some pictures of my wine to you next time:)
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Change "the" to "some" and your sentance is perfect. Write me in four months and let me know if it is good wine. :D
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sunflower's notebook entry: make grape wine --Aug 30, 2010
I made the grape wine by myself yestoday.But i need to wait at least 4 months to taste my wine.Möchten Sie schneller voran kommen?
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